tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6113003131927518092.post1174298340826893908..comments2023-11-21T00:05:07.968-08:00Comments on the INLAID EAR: Writing Queronimunurihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04138257950952544921noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6113003131927518092.post-81986053787023335372011-08-09T13:55:02.513-07:002011-08-09T13:55:02.513-07:00Wonderful poem, Patricia. Love it.Wonderful poem, Patricia. Love it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6113003131927518092.post-39459969711871958682011-08-08T22:42:47.657-07:002011-08-08T22:42:47.657-07:00Wanton
Where does my muse go
when night covers my...Wanton<br /><br />Where does my muse go<br />when night covers my<br />desire to know -<br />gone blink of my eye’s<br />lid fading tableaux?<br /><br />Thoughts now red-eye sly<br />sieved through lashes limp -<br />images squeeze by<br />like girls from their pimp<br />alone on skid row.<br /><br />I can only scrimp<br />pillow dreams from sight -<br />a womanly wimp<br />too afraid to fight<br />my thrown words just cry:<br /><br />Can this barren night<br />strip poetic blight?Patricia A. Hawkensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16516849617491578135noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6113003131927518092.post-41277046622042051062011-08-08T22:37:33.120-07:002011-08-08T22:37:33.120-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.Patricia A. Hawkensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16516849617491578135noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6113003131927518092.post-54216705771925621302011-08-07T13:50:07.933-07:002011-08-07T13:50:07.933-07:00Daniel, I am delighted to see your new form and ho...Daniel, I am delighted to see your new form and hope to try it when I have a chance. I'm a stream of consciousness poet so writing to a form takes time for me.<br /><br />I will try to post my attempt somewhere along with your excellent representation of a queron.Barbara Ehrentreuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06317588534441254146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6113003131927518092.post-20174301904534905372011-08-07T09:45:18.717-07:002011-08-07T09:45:18.717-07:00Dear Daniel..... The concept of the form is just ...Dear Daniel..... The concept of the form is just so illustrative of you there is no question left as to why a form combining the existential and the classicism of the masters has waited for Daniel Ari to materialize! I am "off the radar" this weekend but will try my hand after I have more carefully processed. KUDOS... once again Daniel...a truly modern Renaissance manDr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)https://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6113003131927518092.post-323339155508154352011-08-04T12:21:44.487-07:002011-08-04T12:21:44.487-07:00Yeah...it was a challenge - I will admit to that! ...Yeah...it was a challenge - I will admit to that! I gave it a (1st) shot and posted it over at Poetic Asides. I think it'll go up on my blog in just a few minutes, too. Thanks!RJ Clarkenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03018296461199649445noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6113003131927518092.post-3685733372182599092011-08-04T11:33:04.925-07:002011-08-04T11:33:04.925-07:00Sounds like a great challenge, Daniel. I plan to w...Sounds like a great challenge, Daniel. I plan to write and return to post.Nancyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12624871760177836653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6113003131927518092.post-46907651923690268602011-08-04T09:23:45.296-07:002011-08-04T09:23:45.296-07:00I'd be delighted, Salvatore!I'd be delighted, Salvatore!Daniel Arihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10739828417831492075noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6113003131927518092.post-64642852477542898852011-08-04T05:21:14.919-07:002011-08-04T05:21:14.919-07:00Daniel, I write a column called "Poet Craft&q...Daniel, I write a column called "Poet Craft" for Poetidings, the newsletter of the New Jersey Poetry Society, Inc. In a future issue I'd like to feature your new poetic form, if that's all right with you. Of course, I would mention you as the originator.<br /><br />Salvatore Buttaci<br />author of 200 ShortsSalvatore Buttacihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17477098872186908154noreply@blogger.com